Was a very touching story, I would definitely agree with Kyle and advise you to add more sound effects to maybe make the story more effective to the listeners.
Geez that was intense, very personal and real and he told it well. I don't think it needs sound effects really because that could just distract from his story so I liked that, but the music transitioning to the speaking at the beginning wasn't very smooth.
Great story. Can tell it's personal and involved. Consider adding in more voices and sound ques to help paint a mental picture.
ReplyDeleteWas a very touching story, I would definitely agree with Kyle and advise you to add more sound effects to maybe make the story more effective to the listeners.
ReplyDeleteGeez that was intense, very personal and real and he told it well. I don't think it needs sound effects really because that could just distract from his story so I liked that, but the music transitioning to the speaking at the beginning wasn't very smooth.
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